Dream Deep

Beautiful. Just a tad long, but really quite beautiful. :lots_hearts:

This is great. Poor Imp pretty much highlighted everything there, and I'm no English buff-whatever, so I won’t even try. The only thing I have to say is that it's ...

Thank you very very much, Imp. Where would I be without you? (Turning in a crummy English paper, maybe?...) I do see your point about the lengthy descriptions and I'll ...

Nice. I have absolutely no clue what you're trying to say, but I love it anyway. :smt049

What was that supposed to be ?!? It doesn't even rhyme! I think you may want to consider redoing the rhyme scheme a bit, don't you think?

Thank you so much guys. I'm really glad you liked it - I kind of thought it would be a little too out-there to be amusing. But it was such ...

*grins* I think that was great.

Thanks, Reichieru.

I'm with Pheonix. You guys can talk, but avoid drawing blood. Lighten up, people. (That's you, too, Reas).

Sorry about this, Imp. Older brothers build protective walls around their little sisters. I guess it's nice, but... Wow. :shock:

That Older Brother Protective Instinct kicking in, huh?

Sorry you guys feel this way and I'll make the suggested changes, but I really didn't think it was that offensive. :(

Thanks a lot, guys. I thought this was alright, but I knew it needed something different (added/fixed/killed etc). I appreciate the feedback 100% and I'm really glad that you (McPheever) ...

Pretty cool. I like to think I got all of that but what I got from it might not be at all what you meant. Chrystos Voskres 8)

That was so nice! :smt039 I'm so glad you enjoyed it. That's the point of writing, though isn't it?